Saturday, 24 January 2015

THE SWEETEST MOMENT IN MY LIFE

THE SWEETEST MOMENT IN MY LIFE
By Noor Syazwani bt Sabri (G2.7)

It was raining outside, shaterring rentlessly on[1] my window panes. My finger reached out for my blanky, my faithful companion for this past few years and[2] for my source of comfort. I burried my nose into the liliac cotton quilt, the familiar smell somehow brought a nostalgic feeling to my soul. Blanky never fails to remind me of dad. Memories that I tried so hard to forget them, came flooded  in my mind once again. Tears fell down[3] from the edge of my lashes.
Until today I can still remember his gentle face, his pair of dark brown eyes and his mesmerizing smile that always brighten up our days. Dad is a very energetic person who loves telling jokes, the live wire in our family. I always treasure the precious moments we did awesome things together. Oh![4]  How exciting. Back then, we even had our own mini swimming pool which Dad made himself at[5] Opah’s backyard.
Dad is the greatest inspiration in our family. He did an excellent job for both[6] motivator and great listener in my family. Dad never fails to put a smile on my face even when his days aren’t that good. Although[7] Dad is strict, he is a very loving and kind hearted father that I doubt there is a better Dad than mine, he is one of a kind!.
Unfortunately, the sweet moments didn’t last forever as dad passed away because[8] of a deadly disease ; lung cancer. Worst is, it was on his birthday that I had decided to give him the quilt that I sew myself or ‘blanky’ as a birthday present. I was devastated. For months I would not speak to a soul about the sweet memories Dad and I once shared. The memories were forever locked up inside[9] my heart.
The rain cleared, and the stars that were hidden by dark clouds a few moments ago once again seen. I held ‘blanky’ tight to my heart, convicing myself that off ‘every cloud has a silver lining’. I learnt from this painful experience to cherish each moment of life, because time  is too precious to waste.
(345 words)



[1] On = Preposition  of location
[2] And = Coordinating conjunction
[3] Down = Preposition of location
[4] Oh! = Interjecton
[5] At = preposition
[6] Both...and = Correlative conjuction
[7] Although = Subordinating conjuction
[8] Because = Coordinating conjunction
[9] Inside = preposition

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